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21 May 2008 @ 04:59 pm
World is small.  

The world is small,
The world is small,

She is sick and tired of us all,
She is dying so slowly and painfully,

HELP save her,
HELP save her,

Small compared to others like her,
No other planets like her,

To many humans,
To many humans,

One day she will over flow with us all,
Slowly she will suffocate,

Forever suffering, soon the end will come,
Forever suffering, soon the end will come.

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Location: Rental Home
Mood: artisticartistic
Music: N/A
 
 
 
reginaclarejane on May 21st, 2008 12:18 pm (UTC)
Yes, I agree with starlithenge... you're at a great age to allow your creativity to start flowing! Well done!
Spelling is important in a poem, though! There are so many ways to check it these days- thank goodness!
:)

Edited at 2008-05-21 12:23 pm (UTC)